Hey Thomas your presentation was very descriptive and was packed with information it also shows that you know heaps about Matariki maybe next time you'd like to be more creative with presenting so your viewers would b e attracted and come and read your work.
Hey Thomas, I really like the way you have said what you have done well and what your next steps are.Maybe next time you could make the words a bit easier to see.
Hi my name is Tyrell, these are some great things that you have learnt about matariki, and I like how you have set it out, so how you have what you did and what you did well and what you could do better next time
Hi Thomas,I like your slideshow about the Matariki,Next time try to add colour and put like some exaple and tell the name of the seven stars.
Hi Thomas,I like how you said that it was known as the 7 sister and that it is the eyes of god.
Hi Thomas, l'm Adi from St Bernadette's school. I really like the way you made 10 facts about Matariki and I learned some of Matariki as well. I like the way you told us that you don't no much about Matariki, really like the background of your slideshow. I really like enjoying reading facts about Matariki, good job.
Hey nice work! I like how you typed all the questions down and aswered them.Next time you could add one more slide and remove 5 facts in the first slide and put it in the other slide that you added so that you can have more space.
Hey Thoman Nice job!I like how used different colours in your slide and aswered all the questions in your slide Next time you could add another slide so you can put 5 facts in that slide and 5 facts in the other slide so that you will have enough room for your images.
Hi Thomas,I like how you set your work up,and how you explain about the 7 sister and that it is the eyes of god. Mabey next time you could choose the right colour so that everyone in the world can see how amazing you are.
Hey Thomas I like like your backgrounds of your slide really creative. Maybe next time you could make the text a little easier to see
Hi Thomas, I like the way you put in some facts about Matariki. Next time maybe you could chage the background on the first slide so it is easier to see the writing
Hi Thomas,I like how you set up your work and explain about the 7 sister and that it is the eyes of god.Maybe next time you could use the right colour in your work,so that everyone in the world can see your work
Hi Thomas,I like the facts you've included.Even though you said you didn't know much this slide makes it look like you've known it all for a while.How long did it take to complete this task?