My name is Kieran I live in the South Island far away from Paihia. I really like the structure of your persuasive writing. I really enjoyed reading it. There was mistakes that I found though, maybe next time you could remember to put ‘I’ as a capital when you are writing. We’re not doing persuasive writing, we are doing writing called haiku.
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Kia Ora Izak My name is Summer, I'm from the west coast and I go to karoro school. I enjoy sports and playing with friends.
I really enjoyed your piece of writing based on rules and what would happen without them. Rules are very important things, yes a rugby game with no rules would be complete chaos! I like the fact you have chosen a topic not many people would think of.
Thank you so much Izak for sharing your work, I look forward to looking at more of your posts. Make sure to go check some posts from my Blog.
My name is Madison and I live on the West Coast of New Zealand. I really like how you posted and wrote something different that most blogs that I have seen. Maybe when you have the time you could have a look on my blog and give me thoughtful, helpful, positive comments.
I really liked how you made a point about rules and that you explained why. You also had different examples of why rules are important like in rugby how we need rules. You also made a point that without the rules everything would just be chaos.
In your first paragraph you pointed out that not only teachers have rules but, parents do and that you were also talking about why they have rules. I agree with you on why parents and have rules, what will happen to the parents child when they don’t come to their terms.
In your third paragraph it didn’t make sense on the second line because, you were talking about having a goal in life and then doing whatever you want. Maybe you could explain to me what you were supposed to say.
Other than everything else I really enjoyed reading your points about why we should have rules and what happens when there aren’t rules. I don’t think that rules are needed everywhere because, sometimes we just want to have fun.
Kia Ora Izak I really like the work you posted on your blog. Everybody needs rules in their life. If there were no rules, there wouldn't be us. This is great work Izak. Keep Going. :)
Hi my name is Gerry and I go to Tautoro School. I really enjoyed reading you story. My favorite part about your story was when you explained to us why we need rules and how you pointed out the main parts of your story, like in the first paragraph how you pointed out that not only teachers need rules and why. To improve on your story I think that you should tell us what you believe and why. Other than that this is an awesome and outstanding speech that you have told us. From Gerry.
HI my name is Ruby and I really enjoy reading your story it not just tells people what to do and what not to do but it also interesting exactly why I liked reading but the only thing i would have to say is In your third paragraph it didn’t make sense on the second line because, you were talking about having a goal in life and then doing whatever you want Maybe you could explain to me what you were supposed to say and maybe next time you could give a reason why you think that and explain about it but other then that good story love to read more about it.
Kia Ora Izak this is Parehuia from Tautoro school. I really enjoyed this pice of writing and your right we really do need rules. Some people may hate rules but without rules anything could happen. Like someone could do something really bad and nothing would happen pretty unfair. So maybe rules are a very good thing in this word and thank you for telling me and other people why rules are so important. Anyway keep going with your amazing work from PAREHUIA.
Kia ora Izak, My name is Terina and I go to Kawakawa primary school. I really enjoyed reading about your story about why we should have rules everywhere I definitely agree with you. I want to know is why are rules so important to you?
Hey, Izak My name Is Jayda And Im from Kawakawa Primary School and I Really like Your statement about why we should we should have rules and I think that having rules is also a good thing and I wonder what it would be like if we had no Rules it would rock but at the same time it would be different but a bad different. Jayda x
kia ora izk my name is raumati and i am from a little place called tautoro and i have been reading your story about rules and i think that it is a good thing to have rules for your school thank you for sharing your rules maybe we can use some for our school so thanks
Kia Ora Izak, my names Anthony and I am from Tautoro School. I like the way you have factual info to back your report. I really couldn't imagine a world without world, it'd be chaos I reckon. But there could've been just a few spelling fix - ups here and there. (Like the random capital "t" in the 3rd paragraph) But other than that, good report.
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Hi Izak my name is Te Aroha from Kawakawa primary I like your speech about rules. If we didn't have them the world would be chaos. I like how you explained why we need them and what would happen if we didn't have rules. Do you follow the rules? Good post :)
I like the topic that you chose on Why we need rules and how you gave an example.You just reminded me that I and my friends need to play fairly and play by the rules as you said. I like how you had like firstly, secondly and thirdly. and that It all fits in it's place.
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Ki ora, Izak My name is Ricci, i'm a year 6 from Tautoro School and I would like to say that I beleive we should have rule's in live so that everthing does no become chaotic and horrible. I think you chose a really good topic to write about. So this is my blog link if you want to visit my blog. tsriccib.blogspot.co.nz
Kia ora Izak, My name is Iverson I am in room 5 from Tautoro School you are right without rules in rugby no one would no how to play the game. I really enjoyed reading your speech. One thing I thought you could work on is to explain a little bit more about rules and why. Keep the good blogging up.
Kia ora Izak My name is Areka and I am a year seven student. I read your speech. It was really good how you showed an example of the rules about rugby and how they have developed the rules by changing them from when they played back in the day. I thought it was an awesome speech but there are some things you can work on for next time you write a speech you went a bit off topic so next time you write a speech make sure you write about your topic.Because you didn’t really talk about why we need rules But it was still a brilliant speech Thanks
Kia ora Izak, my name is Kura from Tautoro School, I really like how you posted and wrote something different that most blogs that I have seen. Maybe when you have the time you could have a look on my blog and give me thoughtful, helpful, positive comments. I really liked how you made a point about rules and that you explained why. You also had different examples of why rules are important like in rugby how we need rules. You also made a point that without the rules everything would just be chaos. In your first paragraph you pointed out that not only teachers have rules but, parents do and that you were also talking about why they have rules. I agree with you on why parents and have rules, what will happen to the parents child when they don’t come to their terms. In your third paragraph it didn’t make sense on the second line because, you were talking about having a goal in life and then doing whatever you want. Maybe you could explain to me what you were supposed to say. Other than everything else I really enjoyed reading your points about why we should have rules and what happens when there aren’t rules. I don’t think that rules are needed everywhere because, sometimes we just want to have fun. If you want to visit my blog Click Here to access it Kura's BLOG
Kia ora , my name is Kura from Tautoro School, I really like how you posted and wrote something different that most blogs that I have seen have not. I really liked how you made a point about rules and that you explained why rules are important like in rugby how we need rules. You also made a point that without the rules everything would just be chaos.
Other than that everything else I really enjoyed reading your points about why we should have rules and what happens when there aren’t rules. I don’t think that rules are needed everywhere, sometimes we just want to have fun. Visit my blog Click Here to access it Kura's BLOG
Kia ora Izak, my name is Kura from Tautoro School, I really like how you posted and wrote something different that most blogs that I have seen have not. I really liked how you made a point about rules and that you explained why rules are important like in rugby how we need rules. You also made a point that without the rules everything would just be chaos.
Other than that everything else I really enjoyed reading your points about why we should have rules and what happens when there aren’t rules. I don’t think that rules are needed everywhere, sometimes we just want to have fun. Visit my blog Click Here to access it Kura's BLOG
Kia ora Izak, my name is Kura from Tautoro School, I really like how you posted and wrote something different that most blogs that I have seen have not. I really liked how you made a point about rules and that you explained why rules are important like in rugby how we need rules. You also made a point that without the rules everything would just be chaos.
Other than that everything else I really enjoyed reading your points about why we should have rules and what happens when there aren’t rules. I don’t think that rules are needed everywhere, sometimes we just want to have fun. Visit my blog Click Here to access it Kura's BLOG
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Kieran I live in the South Island far away from Paihia. I really like the structure of your persuasive writing. I really enjoyed reading it. There was mistakes that I found though, maybe next time you could remember to put ‘I’ as a capital when you are writing. We’re not doing persuasive writing, we are doing writing called haiku.
Maybe you could go visit my blog and help me with my work by leaving a comment.
Kierans blog
Yours sincerely Kieran.
Kia Ora Izak
ReplyDeleteMy name is Summer, I'm from the west coast and I go to karoro school. I enjoy sports and playing with friends.
I really enjoyed your piece of writing based on rules and what would happen without them. Rules are very important things, yes a rugby game with no rules would be complete chaos! I like the fact you have chosen a topic not many people would think of.
Thank you so much Izak for sharing your work, I look forward to looking at more of your posts. Make sure to go check some posts from my Blog.
Kia Ora
From Summer
Kia Ora Izak
ReplyDeleteMy name is Madison and I live on the West Coast of New Zealand. I really like how you posted and wrote something different that most blogs that I have seen. Maybe when you have the time you could have a look on my blog and give me thoughtful, helpful, positive comments.
I really liked how you made a point about rules and that you explained why. You also had different examples of why rules are important like in rugby how we need rules. You also made a point that without the rules everything would just be chaos.
In your first paragraph you pointed out that not only teachers have rules but, parents do and that you were also talking about why they have rules. I agree with you on why parents and have rules, what will happen to the parents child when they don’t come to their terms.
In your third paragraph it didn’t make sense on the second line because, you were talking about having a goal in life and then doing whatever you want. Maybe you could explain to me what you were supposed to say.
Other than everything else I really enjoyed reading your points about why we should have rules and what happens when there aren’t rules. I don’t think that rules are needed everywhere because, sometimes we just want to have fun.
Kind Regards
Madison
Kia Ora Izak
ReplyDeleteI really like the work you posted on your blog. Everybody needs rules in their life. If there were no rules, there wouldn't be us. This is great work Izak. Keep Going. :)
Hi my name is Gerry and I go to Tautoro School. I really enjoyed reading you story. My favorite part about your story was when you explained to us why we need rules and how you pointed out the main parts of your story, like in the first paragraph how you pointed out that not only teachers need rules and why. To improve on your story I think that you should tell us what you believe and why. Other than that this is an awesome and outstanding speech that you have told us.
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HI my name is Ruby and I really enjoy reading your story it not just tells people what to do and what not to do but it also interesting exactly why I liked reading but the only thing i would have to say is In your third paragraph it didn’t make sense on the second line because, you were talking about having a goal in life and then doing whatever you want Maybe you could explain to me what you were supposed to say and maybe next time you could give a reason why you think that and explain about it but other then that good story love to read more about it.
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ReplyDeletethis is Parehuia from Tautoro school. I really enjoyed this pice of writing and your right we really do need rules. Some people may hate rules but without rules anything could happen. Like someone could do something really bad and nothing would happen pretty unfair. So maybe rules are a very good thing in this word and thank you for telling me and other people why rules are so important. Anyway keep going with your amazing work
from PAREHUIA.
Kia ora Izak, I think its awesome to have rules,so everything is fair. Well done on explaining why it is important to have rules.
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Kia ora Izak, My name is Terina and I go to Kawakawa primary school. I really enjoyed reading about your story about why we should have rules everywhere I definitely agree with you. I want to know is why are rules so important to you?
ReplyDeleteHey, Izak My name Is Jayda And Im from Kawakawa Primary School and I Really like Your statement about why we should we should have rules and I think that having rules is also a good thing and I wonder what it would be like if we had no Rules it would rock but at the same time it would be different but a bad different.
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Hi room 8. My name is Makere from Kawakawa primary school room 3. I like that you agree that we should all have rules. Do you enjoy rules?
ReplyDeletekia ora izk my name is raumati and i am from a little place called tautoro and i have been reading your story about rules and i think that it is a good thing to have rules for your school thank you for sharing your rules maybe we can use some for our school so thanks
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Izak, my names Anthony and I am from Tautoro School. I like the way you have factual info to back your report. I really couldn't imagine a world without world, it'd be chaos I reckon. But there could've been just a few spelling fix - ups here and there. (Like the random capital "t" in the 3rd paragraph) But other than that, good report.
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Hi Izak my name is Te Aroha from Kawakawa primary I like your speech about rules. If we didn't have them the world would be chaos. I like how you explained why we need them and what would happen if we didn't have rules. Do you follow the rules? Good post :)
ReplyDeleteKia ora Izak. I enjoyed reading your speech. I agree with you. Without rules we would not be safe.
ReplyDeleteTalofa, My name is Melinda from Owairaka Primary
ReplyDeleteI like the topic that you chose on Why we need rules and how you gave an example.You just reminded me that I and my friends need to play fairly and play by the rules as you said. I like how you had like firstly, secondly and thirdly. and that It all fits in it's place.
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Ki ora, Izak My name is Ricci, i'm a year 6 from Tautoro School and I would like to say that I beleive we should have rule's in live so that everthing does no become chaotic and horrible. I think you chose a really good topic to write about. So this is my blog link if you want to visit my blog. tsriccib.blogspot.co.nz
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ReplyDeleteMy name is Iverson I am in room 5 from Tautoro School
you are right without rules in rugby no one would no how to play the game. I really enjoyed reading your speech. One thing I thought you could work on is to explain a little bit more about rules and why. Keep the good blogging up.
Kia ora Izak
ReplyDeleteMy name is Areka and I am a year seven student. I read your speech. It was really good how you showed an example of the rules about rugby and how they have developed the rules by changing them from when they played back in the day. I thought it was an awesome speech but there are some things you can work on for next time you write a speech you went a bit off topic so next time you write a speech make sure you write about your topic.Because you didn’t really talk about why we need rules
But it was still a brilliant speech Thanks
Kia ora Izak, my name is Kura from Tautoro School, I really like how you posted and wrote something different that most blogs that I have seen. Maybe when you have the time you could have a look on my blog and give me thoughtful, helpful, positive comments.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you made a point about rules and that you explained why. You also had different examples of why rules are important like in rugby how we need rules. You also made a point that without the rules everything would just be chaos.
In your first paragraph you pointed out that not only teachers have rules but, parents do and that you were also talking about why they have rules. I agree with you on why parents and have rules, what will happen to the parents child when they don’t come to their terms.
In your third paragraph it didn’t make sense on the second line because, you were talking about having a goal in life and then doing whatever you want. Maybe you could explain to me what you were supposed to say.
Other than everything else I really enjoyed reading your points about why we should have rules and what happens when there aren’t rules. I don’t think that rules are needed everywhere because, sometimes we just want to have fun.
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Kia ora , my name is Kura from Tautoro School, I really like how you posted and wrote something different that most blogs that I have seen have not.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you made a point about rules and that you explained why rules are important like in rugby how we need rules. You also made a point that without the rules everything would just be chaos.
Other than that everything else I really enjoyed reading your points about why we should have rules and what happens when there aren’t rules. I don’t think that rules are needed everywhere, sometimes we just want to have fun.
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Kia ora Izak, my name is Kura from Tautoro School, I really like how you posted and wrote something different that most blogs that I have seen have not.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you made a point about rules and that you explained why rules are important like in rugby how we need rules. You also made a point that without the rules everything would just be chaos.
Other than that everything else I really enjoyed reading your points about why we should have rules and what happens when there aren’t rules. I don’t think that rules are needed everywhere, sometimes we just want to have fun.
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Kia ora Izak, my name is Kura from Tautoro School, I really like how you posted and wrote something different that most blogs that I have seen have not.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you made a point about rules and that you explained why rules are important like in rugby how we need rules. You also made a point that without the rules everything would just be chaos.
Other than that everything else I really enjoyed reading your points about why we should have rules and what happens when there aren’t rules. I don’t think that rules are needed everywhere, sometimes we just want to have fun.
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Hi my name is Tuishaly and I go to Tutoro school and
ReplyDeleteI thak that we need rules be cause it is safe and we have rules.