Tuesday 31 May 2016

Biography by Brad

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Ann Makosinski

How would you like to have a flashlight powered by only holding it in your hand? Ann Makosinski created a flashlight that is powered by the heat of the human hand She used peltier tiles for the thermoelectric component.When one side is heated the other feels cool ambient air,electricity conducted and the flashlight was able to function perfectly without batteries.

Ann Makosinski was born on October the 3rd 1997 she was born in Victoria, British Columbia and is now 18 years old and goes to St. Michael's University school.She invented the hand heated flashlight when she was 16 years old and was still in high school.

Ann Makosinski’s goal was to provide unlimited power and electricity.The flashlight can produce a steady beam of LED light for up to 20 minutes. Ann makosinski also created the E-Drink and a coffee mug that harvests the excess heat of a hot drink while it cools.

Ann Makosinski is a really good person to study about because she is trying to make the world a better place by making a flashlight with unlimited power.

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13 comments:

  1. Hi I'm Ridge, I liked your writing and that you chose a cool subject to write about. visit my blog at http://lakebrunnerridges.blogspot.co.nz/

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  2. Great blog post. It was interesting to read and I can't believe that she was 16 when she created a flash light that runs on our hand heat. Great post and keep it up.

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  3. That is pretty amazing id buy one of those

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  4. Hi, Brad I really like the way you've written your biography it is really interesting,I also like how you did a self assessment.I didn't know that Ann Makosinski made that flashlight that's very interesting.Maybe next time you might like to use different apps to present your text.

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  5. Hi Brad, I really like how you have written your biography it's really nice, it's also nice that you have done a self assessment.I didn't know that Ann Makosinski made that flashlight that really cool Is she like a great inspiration to you?. Maybe next you might like to use different apps for your text.

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  6. Hi Brad, I really like how you have written your biography it's really nice, it's also nice that you have done a self assessment.I didn't know that Ann Makosinski made that flashlight that really cool Is she like a great inspiration to you?. Maybe next you might like to use different apps for your text.

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  7. Nice job Brad, I like the way you ended your writing with make the world a better place by making a flash light with unlimited power.Next time use different paragraphs for separate ideas because in the same paragraph you mentioned the torch and the E- drink.

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  8. Hi Brad, I really like how you have written your biography it's really nice, it's also nice that you have done a self assessment.I didn't know that Ann Makosinski made that flashlight that really cool Is she like a great inspiration to you?. Maybe next you might like to use different apps for your text.

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  9. Hi Brad, I really like how you have written your biography it's really nice, it's also nice that you have done a self assessment.I didn't know that Ann Makosinski made that flashlight that really cool Is she like a great inspiration to you?. Maybe next you might like to use different apps for your text.

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  10. Hi,
    I like how your are proud of your writing and how you have cheked for spelling mistakes.
    Maybe next time you could use more descriptive words instead of 'good'.
    Thanks,
    Bye

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  11. Hi, I like how you included her age it's incredible that someone so young could create something as cool as this. I like how you used a chart for your self and peer assessment it makes it easy to read. Maybe next time you could go over your work again and check for mistakes.

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  12. Hey,I like how you had lots if info.and good to see you are confident about you writing with all those ticks.

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