Hi Aliyah, I really liked how you answered all the questions in detail.Next time you should use a different font so its easier to read Baileyparoagreybaileyr.blogspot.co.nz
Hi Aliyah, I really liked your writing. A next step would be to put it in a different font so it is easier to read. Check out my blog:http://paroagreycatarinam.blogspot.co.nz/
Hey Aliyah,I like how you set your work out and that you proved that you aswered all the questionsNext time can you change the font because it's hard to read and you have to come closer to help you see clearly
Hey Aliyah ,I like how you used all you question in your work.Next time you should re-read to check your work if it makes sense.Thank you
Hi Aliyah this is Parehuia from Tautoro School next time remember to go through your story to make sure it makes sense and use a diffirint font so you can read it properly but besides that it was an amazing story and I loved it keep it up.