tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-86999336667214548.post4632463970606258916..comments2019-09-16T23:13:25.149+12:00Comments on Room 8 @ Paihia School: Aliyah SpeechWhaea Chrissyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12619769365759134831noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-86999336667214548.post-19228591313857607532016-08-22T13:12:35.364+12:002016-08-22T13:12:35.364+12:00Kia Ora Aliyah,
My name is Anthony and i'm a y...Kia Ora Aliyah,<br />My name is Anthony and i'm a year 7 student at Tautoro School. I really enjoyed reading your story because it had lots of facts to back up your story. It just goes to show what happens when your a drink driver. Deaths, injuries etc...<br /><br />But next time maybe you could get your story checked before you post it, because there were a few mistakes here and there. For example, no spaces after a comma and sometimes there was a double space.<br /><br />Other than that, great story, I hope to see more from you.<br /><br />See ya,<br />Anthony.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-86999336667214548.post-66419194295077030522016-08-18T13:53:03.640+12:002016-08-18T13:53:03.640+12:00Hi Aliyah
My name is Ruby I go to Tautoro school I...Hi Aliyah<br />My name is Ruby I go to Tautoro school I enjoyed reading your story because it was not just easy to read but the truth it shows people what can happen and what they did was wrong and therefore losing their life for there choices but not just them they are also hurting other including friend family and others.<br /><br />I think you should go back and check your work there are a few mistake in their and you might need to check them because it would make it easier for the reader (like me) to read But other then that amazing story great work.<br /><br />And I just wanted to say your story really caught my attention it really made me realise what can happen in real life and how it will effect people.<br />so once again great story.<br /><br />By Ruby<br /><br /><br /> Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-86999336667214548.post-52806454915276335292016-08-16T13:25:09.124+12:002016-08-16T13:25:09.124+12:00Hello Aliyah my name is Toko I'm from Tautoro ...Hello Aliyah my name is Toko I'm from Tautoro School I'll like to say you check your work before you post and make shore you it makes sence. Blog you later. From Toko.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com